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Dar’kind Promises – Secret Thirteen

Is something I’ve written every really finished? I edit each piece I write, extensively. My critique partner goes through the work and gives me feed back and her thoughts. I edit again. I would guess I have probably been through Dar’kind Promises at least a hundred and fifty times editing. I let it rest and edit some more with fresh eyes. I make probably twenty passes working on format and tweaking words. When I send it off to the editor I feel like I’ve done my best to make it finished. Then she goes through and makes her edits. I receive her comments and I go through the piece again addressing things she has noted. I often find things at that time that I edit some more. Is it finished yet?

At some point you just have to stop and send it. But No, it probably isn’t really finished. I have to let it go. Even now I’ve seen a couple things while I’m preparing these articles. A word here or there. A thought that I should have developed a concept a little more. Perhaps, I didn’t address something clear enough.

The secret is, I don’t think I am ever completely satisfied with the work. I just let go.

Dar’kind Promises – Secret Twelve

Dar’kind Fairy Wings are very different. They are shaped like a butterfly but translucent like a dragon fly.

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They can be flexible and floaty or stretched tight and rigid. The individual controls the firmness of the wings in response to need and mood. The amount of blood in the channels of the wing membranes controls their texture.  When a fairy needs to fly the wings have to be very tight and rigid.  Yet when they are relaxed the wings can drape and float around their body.

When I was creating the book trailer for Dar’kind Promises I needed a model with fair wings.

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My daughter is a photographer and has Lynn Marcello Photography. She helped me with some of the photographs.

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Take a look at the book trailer and see what you think of the final result.

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WOW – Writers Words of Wisdom

This is a new weekly column that I’ve joined with the others authors over at Writers Words of Wisdom to produce.

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Take a look at the other authors topics at these locations.

Paloma Beck: http://romancebeckons.blogspot.com/search/label/WoW

Lacey Wolfe: http://laceywolfe.com/blog.html

BRANDING YOURSELF

This sounds terribly painful in the day to day world. However, it is one of the relatively new words in marketing. Brand yourself with a presence that makes a statement about what you are about.

I had the opportunity to visit the Chattanooga Writer’s Guild this past week and attend a session by Allie Pleiter, an Inspirational Romance Novelist from the Chicago Area. She has some interesting things to say about writing, marketing and conducting business as an author. I wish to share my take on what she had to say and how it impacts me as an author. I had been ‘poking’ at the branding concept for some time. I had business cards made at Vista Print and chose one of their canned logos with a skull and flowers around it. I constructed the phrase, “Leave Your Safe World Behind” as a tag line. I have a few t-shirts with the logo on it and my name “Eden Glenn Erotic Romance Author” I have the tag line and my website on the back. It’s very attractive. Yet I wasn’t sure the logo was doing it for me.  As my critique partner said, skulls say gothe or pirates. Not so much either one.

Okay, on to what I learned from Allie Pleiter.

“Because marketing matters for everyone now” She said. I’ve accepted this as part of my life. The door that opened to allow me into the epub world also let in a host of others all wanting to find readers. It is a tough world out there to find readers and get their attention.

The process Allie went through was a self analysis to target yourself. Authors more than ever diversify their writing so finding a common thread and branding you as an author has become more important than ever. Follow me as I employed her three part process to find my “Brand”.

Part 1

“Analyze the reviews of three writers you want to be like. Why do people like J.R. Ward etc…. Analyze their reviews. What are the attributes they are drawn to. If you want to be like them, shoot for their attributes.”

What are reviewers saying about their work and why do the reviewers say they like about those authors. Where is a common thread there for me?

Okay, so I adore: J.R. Ward, Joey Hill, and Angela Knight

I looked up J.R. Ward’s first book in the Black Dagger Brotherhood Series Dark Lover. First overwhelming moment is realizing that book has 778 customer reviews. Jeash.

Ravenous Reader says “If you’re looking for a book that’s well written, has interesting, flawed characters you want to root for, heroes and heroines that have amazing chemistry, compelling relationships, and great love scenes, AND a plot that keeps you turning the pages, this is the book (and series) for you!”

Gingersnap said “I laughed, I gasped and sweated reading every last page of this book. As another reviewer said, “The Black Dagger Brotherhood owns me…”. Dark, magical, full of lust, love and action, this book will posess you. Well, well JR Ward… dont mind if I do.”

Kalea said “I have without a doubt The Black Dagger Brotherhood will have a cult following. It’s dark, dramatic, and the characters are likable. They all have their own little kinks.”

I was also surprised at the number of horrible reviews. I mean really horrible. That is something for me to hold on through the future years as a writer. Not everyone is going to like everything. Your value is not controlled by the reviews you get.

Next, I looked at Joey Hill “Something About Witches” book that I am loving. I was sucked in from the first line.

L Finder said “If you want a book that will have you laughing, have you crying, and have you thrilled to be in the company of strong, smart sexy characters, buy this book.”

Linda Crooks said “Something About Witches is vivid and smart, and Joey W. Hill is a breathtakingly sensual writer. Complex, gut-wrenchingly emotional, and jam-packed with action and angst, you won’t want to put this one down. This is one intense read; it will grab your heart, shake it around a bit, and not let go until the very last page.”

Then, Angela Knight – The Time Hunters

So many books said “Angela Knight uses words to craft a believable world and compelling characters. She does it right, she does it well. I can see, smell, feel,touch and taste her stories. When I read her books I feel as if I’m there.”

M. Nix: “Warrior is action-packed with danger and a flaming hot love story.”

L. Curtis: “The characters are three dimensional, the plot’s realistic and intriguing, and setting draws you into her world.”

Okay, So what am I seeing here as a common thread that I relate to in my work. Dark, edgy, compelling, three dimensional characters, emotional, Takes you into their world. Action, Danger, Erotic, sensual

My tag line works. “Leave Your Safe World Behind” I take readers into my world. I want them to have an emotional experience reading my books. I want three dimensional characters with flaws. Believable, compelling, Dark and Dramatic.

The next thing in developing a brand that she said was to

Part 2.

Descriptions of Media Characters who capture your affection / attention.

Adam Lambert; Jason Mamoa ( Khal Drogo in the HBO medieval fantasy television series Game of Thrones), and Lara Croft (Tomb Raider fame)

Adam Lambert, professional singer, Talented, smart, erotic, edgy but personable. Takes you on an emotional journey through music

Khal Drogo, Conan were roles played by Jason Mamoa. Powerful, erotic, mysterious, edgy

Lara Croft – Strong, secretive, sexy, Smart.

What do these three media personalities have in common. They are all sexy, smart, fierce, edgy. They are like the characters I want to create in my writing. And again, I’m in luck my “Leave Your Safe World Behind” tag line continues to work. The concept is the writers you respect and the media characters or personalities that you like will reveal that core about yourself that you need to define and tie to your writing. This information isn’t your brand but it helps you focus you toward your brand. My tag line was already created but this exercise could have helped me refocus to a truer tag line. Fortunately, I think my tag line is a pretty accurate reflection.

Part 3

Choose a metaphor

Hers was a disco ball. It reflects light. Permission to be a little stupid. Chance to lighten up a little bit.

I’m not sure what my metaphor would be.  I am thinking a door, doorway, and archway?

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I’m not sure how that would work in terms of a logo? What are your thoughts?file8661296144575

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file5051286995088She said if you are not excited by the results of your investigation you are not there yet. Ask yourself: What are the themes in your writing. What do you value. What do you want to be. Why do you write. That is close to your brand.

Her brand ended up being Adventure. Her parenting books were an Adventure in Parenting. The knitting blog and Adventure in Yarn, her fiction, Adventures in Historical Fiction, Adventures in Contemporary Fiction. Adventure was the hub. Her logo became a compass. The adventure isn’t out there. You hold the compass. The adventure starts right where you are, became her tag line. So you see the pattern.

Her closing comment on this segment was about promoting. It is often hard for authors to promote themselves. Yet when they find their core values and passion they find it easy to promote those values.

So, lets discuss your discoveries. What are your tag lines and logos? What do you think my logo should be?

Dar’kind Promises – Secret Eleven

There are two races of Fae people. The Dar’kind Fairy and the Daie’kind Fairy. While the Dar’kinds are dark almost gothic, the Daie’kind are fair and light like the Day.

Dar’kind Fairies were inspired by this piece of art by Anne Stokes. http://www.annestokes.com

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However, the wings are different. But that is a secret for another day. LOL

In the creation phase I gave some thought to making the Dar’kind Fae people very fair and light in odds to their name Dark. They would have white hair. I thought that would be a twist yes.

However, an even bigger twist would be in their natures. The Dar’kind are the good Fae. They are honorable and embrace the light of the soul. The Daie’kind Folk are generally selfish and choose what will benefit them more than the greater good.

Dar’kind Promises – Secret Ten

We are up to the tenth secret already. I hope you have enjoyed the secrets revealed. Have you been surprised by anything so far?

For today. All fairies have wings don’t they?

I would think so. Yet, we couldn’t have Maura walking around Earth Dimension with wings fluttering. Could we? So Verucca had to meddle there too.  She spelled Maura’s wings with Magic. Her wings retracted into her body to remain hidden. Unfortunately, the flaw to the plan was that when Maura got wet her wings would emerge. That’s fine if you are alone in the shower.  It’s a little cramped when you get caught in the rain.

Excerpt:

Maura slipped her key out of her pocket and quietly stalked closer, her senses on high alert guarded against a trap. The young female seemed harmless enough. She watched the woman a moment more before slipping up to her. A shiver shook the girl. As she shuddered, she looked up, noticing Maura in the shadows for the first time. Wretchedness shown from her eyes in a look pleading for the kindness of simple human compassion. At least, that was how Maura chose to interpret it.

She made a quick decision that might become her undoing. She would have to hide her cramped tangled wings until she could get dry and they would recede again. She opened the door and pushed it wide. The stale smell of cheap motel drifted from the room. “Come inside out of the weather. I can spare you shelter for the night, until this storm clears.”

The woman struggled to stand, stiff and cold from huddling on the doorstep. How long had she been there? Maura slipped in under her shoulder and supported her into the room. The décor mimicked early junk, walls painted a flat yellow. Maura couldn’t get past how similar the color of the walls and baby Batura excrement.

Chilled stone cold, nearing hypothermic, the woman allowed herself to be led into the warmth of the room. Maura kicked the door shut and pulled the blanket from the bed as they stumbled by. She wrapped the blanket around the woman, seating her on the toilet seat. Next, she flipped on the shower full force. One positive benefit the rundown roadside eyesore of a motel possessed a generosity of hot water.

Looking at her guest trussed up in the blanket, her skin still had an unhealthy shade of clammy blue.

“We both need to get warm. I don’t think this is a time to worry about the details of how.”

Goddess, she wanted to let her wings stretch out to dry. Maura wanted to shed her wet clothes but couldn’t risk the woman’s reaction to her otherworldliness. Translucent wings erupting from her shoulder blades could not be explained. They’d have to stay cramped a while longer. The urgency of the moment to get the young woman warm in the shower would have to be excuse enough for Maura to stay clothed.

Dar’kind Promises – Secret Nine

Maura has pointed fairy ears which she covers with a hat when she is out in human public. The bad guy recognizes her as one of the Fae folk. He’s seen her kind before. Could this be a real lead to Ardith?

He comments on her ears and she tries to deflect it by saying — industrial accident when she was a child.

This scene and comment are a nod to an episode of the original Star Trek. In an episode where Kirk and Spock time traveled back to old earth. The City On the Edge of Forever 1967 The conversation as recorded on the link was

[Having arrived in Earth’s distant past, Captain Kirk steals clothing so he and Spock can blend in but is halted by the sudden appearance of a policeman]
Policeman: [seeing Kirk with an armload of clothing] Well?
Capt. Kirk: You’re a police officer. I recognize the traditional accoutrements.
Spock: [in regards to his own appearance] You were saying you’ll have no trouble explaining it.
Capt. Kirk: [on the spot to explain Spock’s alien features] My friend… is obviously Chinese. I see you’ve noticed the ears. They’re… actually easy to explain…
Spock: Perhaps the unfortunate accident I had as a child…
Capt. Kirk: …the unfortunate accident he had as a child. He caught his head in a mechanical… rice picker… but, fortunately, there was an American missionary living close by who was actually a, uh, skilled, uh, plastic surgeon in civilian life…
Policeman: All right, all right. Drop those bundles and put your hands on that wall there. Come on!

It was incredibly funny. I wanted to give a nod to that scene and other trek fans. LOL

Dar’kind Promises – Secret Eight

I wanted a fierce cat for Zelia’s feline form. Yet something that wasn’t really recognizable in this Earth Dimension. Zelia’s large predatory cat form was inspired by a Caracal Cat. They were interesting and unusual.

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Yet I wanted the animal to have spots. So I found a picture of a Clouded Leopard.  But it still wasn’t right.

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I had my daughter photo shop the cat so it was spotted, with tufts on ears and cheeks. I think she did it in a way that looks very natural. So, the Tracker race was created.

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Dar’kind Promises – Secret Seven

Spoiler:

Who is the Indigo dragon trapped in the slaughter house? He’s going to be saved so don’t worry too much about him. Remember, Maura set a spell that will bring someone to his rescue. Oh? well trust me it will happen.

In (WT) Dragon’s Mark Cathwren accidently triggers that spelled portal and is swept to the abandoned packing plant. She finds and rescues Kiernan, the Indigo dragon. There is some conflict on how exactly Magic brought her to his rescue. It is a question unresolved in Dragon’s Mark.  

Now we know the secret!

Dar’kind Promises – Secret Six

The way the bag guy gets into the hotel room to attack Maura is in the guise of the Pizza Deliveryman. What kind of pizza is Maura’s favorite? I didn’t mention in the manuscript.

Our local pizza the Mellow Mushroom has a great Caesar Pizza. My son loves the meat lovers pizza. The local pizza buffet, Cici’s Pizza does a great BBQ Pizza. And we have the choice of a variety of delivery pizza places. Is it sad they they recognize me from caller I.d. and ask if I would like my regular order? LOL.

Maura and I share a common favorite flavored Pizza. Pepperoni, Mushrooms and Black Olives. It is also the favorite pizza of Cathwren in that dragon story I’ve been working on forever. LOL Secret shhhh

What is your favorite pizza concoction?

Dar’kind Promises – Secret Five

Secret Number Five. The quest of the story is central to following up on leads in search of Ardith. Who is Ardith?

The whole world of WyrmArach, the Dimension where things are quite unusual. Dragons fly, feline shape shifters, fairies and more was created in my novel length WIP called at the moment Dragon’s Mark.  This is the working title. I know the name will need to change because when I google “Dragon’s Mark” I get a lot of information pointed at a video game.

The Second book WIP in that series is Dragon’s Soul is The story of Isobeau and Kiernan. Yes, Isobeau the healer from Dar’kind Promises. 

In Dar’kind Promises I had the chance to explore other races from the WyrmArach Dimension. The Trackers and the Fae. The tendrils of this story are in Dragon’s Soul

In that story line, Isobeau is captured and taken back to the WyrmArach Dimension where she will be sentenced to a life of pleasure slave. She is pierced and fitted for her slave chains by a Dar’kind Fairy. Yes, Ardith. Ardith has her own secrets in what has happened to her. Some of her past is horrific. The torture and her disfigurement leave her unable to rescue herself. She is trapped.

While working on Dragon’s Soul and meeting Ardith, I wondered if anyone was looking for her. Didn’t she have anyone to save her? Didn’t anyone care?

Maura’s story grew out of these thoughts. Ardith isn’t rescued yet but I have a feeling her time will come. Happy Reading.